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Title: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: badcrazygirl on October 06, 2004, 04:50:45 AM
Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings and his intelligence to inspire and revolutionize American citizens and the United States of America.
whats another word i can use instead of revolutionize?
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: SoaringUSAEagle on October 06, 2004, 11:03:39 AM
Try thesaurus.com

I use it a lot.
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: badcrazygirl on October 06, 2004, 12:19:57 PM
tyvm  ;D
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: marky03 on October 06, 2004, 06:56:29 PM
Dark try not to use and... and ...and in one sentence. maybe commas
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: marky03 on October 06, 2004, 06:58:26 PM
Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings, with his intelligence to inspire citizens, and to revolutionize American citizens and the United States of America.

That any good? just trying to help
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: RocknRollGirl on October 06, 2004, 07:37:59 PM
All of these words are Related Word:  alter, change, modify; recast, refashion, reform, remodel; redraw, restyle, revamp, revise; metamorphose, transfigure, transform, transmogrify; overthrow and overturn.  Hope one of these will work for you?
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: badcrazygirl on October 06, 2004, 07:45:41 PM
that thesis statement works thanks a bunch much appreciated
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: bigbear78 on October 06, 2004, 07:51:21 PM
Quote from: darkearthgoddess on October 06, 2004, 04:50:45 AM
Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings and his intelligence to inspire and revolutionize American citizens and the United States of America.
whats another word i can use instead of revolutionize?

How about:

Thomas Jefferson was a man who inspired and revolutionized the American Citizens and the USA though his writings and intelligence. :D
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: badcrazygirl on October 06, 2004, 07:56:44 PM
watch the grammer through* lol but it's good but i like the first better
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: DEBKARLAR on October 06, 2004, 08:56:00 PM
something doesn't look right

"Thomas Jefferson was a man who used his writings...."

was that all he used his writing for?

how about
Thomas Jefferson was a man who WITH his writings

"the American Citizens and the USA though his writings and intelligence."

which American north /south?

how about
The Citizens of the USA

what ever you decide to do Dark . Read /Reread
and then read  it to at least 2-3 other persons mom/dad aunt/uncle ect...
Title: Re: thesis statement for thomas jefferson term paper
Post by: badcrazygirl on October 07, 2004, 03:13:30 AM
alright thanks a bunch muhc appreciated  ;D